Research Skills and Project Planning

This is my dissertation proposal , and I have received this comment from my supervisor .
Please update the proposal according to the below comment .
I am afraid that you need to make some amendments to your research skills assignment, your lecturer has the following comments:

In order for this to achieve a pass grade you have to make the following amendments:

1. More current literature must be included in the introduction
2. More current literature must be included in the literature review (most references come from the 1990’s)
3. A clearer explanation and justification of the research strategy – including sampling, ethics and limitations
4. The submission must be written in the third person
If you could work on this please, and re-submit by the beginning March please.

Research Skills and Project Planning

This is my dissertation proposal , and I have received this comment from my supervisor .
Please update the proposal according to the below comment .
I am afraid that you need to make some amendments to your research skills assignment, your lecturer has the following comments:

In order for this to achieve a pass grade you have to make the following amendments:

1. More current literature must be included in the introduction
2. More current literature must be included in the literature review (most references come from the 1990’s)
3. A clearer explanation and justification of the research strategy – including sampling, ethics and limitations
4. The submission must be written in the third person
If you could work on this please, and re-submit by the beginning March please.