quality

Order Description
did the project hear and the it was under number order 81661693 and then i order some improvement on it under order number 81674387 and now my Dr send me he need some more improvement and thees are the comment

Introduction – could be better … include proper references for each of the topics included – still missing Quality of services, Quality in tourism

· Lit review – the topics should be introduced broader including proper references for each of them – still missing references/citations;

· Research work – use more of the SPC tool we have discussed during our classes, use Fishbone to search for the causes – include Specification limits, calculate Cp, use Fishbone, Pareto;

Discussion – has to be rewritten, as it is now is rather presentation and analysis of the results; you have to discuss your results in the light of other results found by other authors – not good enough,
You have to include more citations of other authors and discuss your results in comparison to their results/ideas/findings;

· Conclusion – short overview of the whole project – still missing.

so please take care of my order and do the best i have to do as my Dr want it to pass

i attached the prevues paper

please color the new writing to know where is it.

quality

Order Description
did the project hear and the it was under number order 81661693 and then i order some improvement on it under order number 81674387 and now my Dr send me he need some more improvement and thees are the comment

Introduction – could be better … include proper references for each of the topics included – still missing Quality of services, Quality in tourism

· Lit review – the topics should be introduced broader including proper references for each of them – still missing references/citations;

· Research work – use more of the SPC tool we have discussed during our classes, use Fishbone to search for the causes – include Specification limits, calculate Cp, use Fishbone, Pareto;

Discussion – has to be rewritten, as it is now is rather presentation and analysis of the results; you have to discuss your results in the light of other results found by other authors – not good enough,
You have to include more citations of other authors and discuss your results in comparison to their results/ideas/findings;

· Conclusion – short overview of the whole project – still missing.

so please take care of my order and do the best i have to do as my Dr want it to pass

i attached the prevues paper

please color the new writing to know where is it.