editing two paragraph , and do it in two slides

 I have two paragraph as introduaction of Protecting the Nation from Foreign Terrorist Entry into the United States 

I want you to EDIT them only NOT adding anything , I mean editing chick if there any mistakes or if you can make the sentences and the informations more better or more effective 

Also, do TWO slides powerpoint of them , the slides shoud be :

1-they shoud be simple and in point not paragraphs

2-add some simple picture and design on them 

3-both of slides shoud have speakers notes , so when i show the two slides for the listeners , i have speakers notes to read infront of them about theses two slides 

DEDLINE  5 hours from NOW