Comment:
1) Make sure that the thesis of your essay is specific and argumentative. How did citizen journalism counter government attempts? It?s accepted and understood that social media played a significant role in the Arab Spring, so make sure that the essay?s thesis is unique.

2) Be sure to read over each sentence and correct any run-on sentences or sentence fragments.

3) Expand upon the conclusion drawing out the implications of your essay?s argument. What role do you see social media playing in future revolutions? Are there other up and coming technologies that you think will have an impact on the way people interact/protest their government?

4))Please give an interesting beginning in the essay.

5)You should a clearly thesis statement on the essay.

6)At the end of each paragraph, you should have your own opinions and analysis.

7)You should rewite the content at least 50%,not just rewrite the thesis statement and the conclusion.

Comment:
1) Make sure that the thesis of your essay is specific and argumentative. How did citizen journalism counter government attempts? It?s accepted and understood that social media played a significant role in the Arab Spring, so make sure that the essay?s thesis is unique.

2) Be sure to read over each sentence and correct any run-on sentences or sentence fragments.

3) Expand upon the conclusion drawing out the implications of your essay?s argument. What role do you see social media playing in future revolutions? Are there other up and coming technologies that you think will have an impact on the way people interact/protest their government?

4))Please give an interesting beginning in the essay.

5)You should a clearly thesis statement on the essay.

6)At the end of each paragraph, you should have your own opinions and analysis.

7)You should rewite the content at least 50%,not just rewrite the thesis statement and the conclusion.

1) Assess the criticisms made by Judge Posner of the idea of creating a national director of intelligence. Do you think these are valid criticisms?

2) The caption of 18 U.S.C. 2332b refers to “acts of terrorism transcending national boundaries.” Does any other language in 2332b define “acts of terrorism?” Examine the substantive provisions of the section very carefully. Is there any place in the statue where the concept of terrorism or one of the definitions of terrorism is inserted in or is part of a provision describing a substantive violation of this section?

3) Is there an express definition of terrorism in 18 U.S.C. 2339C? If not, what definition of terrorism and theory(ies) of international criminal jurisdiction underlie the section?