I need a kindly feedback for this class mate. Her essay is horrible. I need to give her a professional feedback without hurting her feelings.<\/p>\n
Use this week\u2019s discussion to give and get some helpful feedback on the final essay assignment.<\/p>\n
To begin, upload your draft as an attachment to a posting here as early in the week as possible. Incomplete drafts are acceptable, but remember that the more complete the draft, the better the feedback will be.<\/p>\n
Next, download a fellow student\u2019s draft and comment on it. Keep in mind the rubric standards: strong opening, thesis statement, good organization and development of key ideas in the body paragraphs, strong conclusion. Think about the following questions as you read the paper:<\/p>\n
\u00b7 Is the thesis clear?<\/p>\n
\u00b7 Does the writer provide convincing support for his or her thesis points, using good sources?<\/p>\n
\u00b7 Are the ideas arranged logically, so they are easy to follow?<\/p>\n
\u00b7 Does the writer adhere to APA requirements, especially in terms of documentation?<\/p>\n
\u00b7 Is the writing fluent? Or do errors in mechanics undercut the writer’s credibility?<\/p>\n
\u00b7 What can you learn from this draft and apply to your own paper?<\/p>\n
\u00b7 Summarize your thoughts on the presentation and applaud the best parts of the work.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
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